I've only listened to your youtube music video:
- Sound quality only ? It's missing the full piano sound...probably due to the mic quality and positioning. I also don't know what type/brand of piano you played on that video.
- Music rhythm/composition only ? I found some liaisons not smoothly transitioning between. The overall result is a little lost in music translation to me, like my emotions aren't connecting between slower and faster passages.
Sorry for being dead honest. Keep playing; the piano is my favorite musical instrument, and with practice you won't have to ask anyone else what they think; you'll know yourself with assurance just by listening on your own. It's only my opinion on what I think, feel, hear and groove to.
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https://www.gearslutz.com/board/